Monday, May 24, 2010

my five facts

  1. 1 million kids get pessured into doing something that they dont want to do just so they can be cool.
  2. Most kids are pessured to drink,smoke,or have sex.
  3.  Many of the kids parents are having troubles to talk to their kids.
  4. The kids that are pessured have a bad time at school even though they are cool.
  5. Some of the kids kill themselves.  

my character biography

Starnjia is a very good kid and before she moved this was her life.Starnjia's old school wad the best school  she had ever went to.The people there were very nice and she had friends, that she could trust.Starnjia's mother Stephany was on crack, she did not have a job her husband which is starnjia's father had to take care of everything, he cooked he cleaned and worked double hours.It was the worse time for starnjia she had no one to talk to because her mom was always on crack. So she could not talk to her dad, because he had no thought of what was going on. this is what happend in her life has a character before they moved.   

Wednesday, May 5, 2010

MY STORY

I.INTRODUCTION          
A.My characters are starnija,her mom stephiney,also her school counselor. 
B.My story takes place in Anlanta,Georgia. The dates are between 2010 may,1 - 2011 may,1   
C.IN the story there is going to be a girl named starnjia put under pressure.She does not know what to do and she can not speak to     
because her mother is on drugs.


II.RISING ACTION  
A.The main events that happen in my story are. 
1)Starnjia moves to alanta and goes to mickeys middle school.  
2)her mother has an adiction to drugs and tries to stay off but she just cant.  
3)starnjia is being teased by some junkies named kelly and mandy. 

4) starnjia is forced to smoke and drink after a party kelly says if you want to stay cool tou have to keep on doing it.  
5)her mother is off drugs and she can finally talk to her.  

B.My character wants to be popular.She has had it with Kelly and Mandy!  


III.CLIMAX 
A.The most important event in the story is starnjia realizes that she should just be herself. 
B. The turning point for the main character is when her mother said being cool is worse than being uncool and she took the advise that is the turning point.  


IV. FALLING ACTION 
A.THE DIRECT RESULT IS THAT SCHOOL WAS ACTUALLY BETTER THAN BEFORE NOW THAT SHE TOOK HER MAMAS advise 
B. the reaction were that starnjia was happy and excited.


V. RESOLUTION 
A. my character learned that she should just be herself to succeed in school. 
B.my character is going to stay at mickeys middle school and handle her problems.



































  
6)starnjia finally realizes that she should just be herself.  
7)people started to treat her differently because she had stood up to kelly and mandy.  
8)starnjia didnot want to move after that and she had to be cause  her mom found a new job. 
9)they went back after her mom said okay and they stayed.  
10)she stayed in mickeys middle ever since it was time for high school.  


                                                                                            

Saturday, May 1, 2010

MY BOOK REPORT

The book I am reading is Addy. This book is about a girl and her mother escape from slavery. Her dad was taken by another ower. Her brother was sold to another ower and Addy's little sister staying with the auntie and uncle. Addy and her mother had to wait until night night time. To wait and leave.This is so, because the guard had left. They took the train,they swam and walked when they got to thier final destation Addy and her mother went to go see this woman the woman help them she feed Addy and her mother and when she thought they were ready to be on thier own the woman let them take the train to the south where people wetre allowed to be free Addy started school and her mother got a job to provide for them.     

(I DID NOT SAY THE MOTHER'S NAME BECAUSE I DO NOT KNOW HOW TO SPELL IT. )