Wednesday, May 5, 2010

MY STORY

I.INTRODUCTION          
A.My characters are starnija,her mom stephiney,also her school counselor. 
B.My story takes place in Anlanta,Georgia. The dates are between 2010 may,1 - 2011 may,1   
C.IN the story there is going to be a girl named starnjia put under pressure.She does not know what to do and she can not speak to     
because her mother is on drugs.


II.RISING ACTION  
A.The main events that happen in my story are. 
1)Starnjia moves to alanta and goes to mickeys middle school.  
2)her mother has an adiction to drugs and tries to stay off but she just cant.  
3)starnjia is being teased by some junkies named kelly and mandy. 

4) starnjia is forced to smoke and drink after a party kelly says if you want to stay cool tou have to keep on doing it.  
5)her mother is off drugs and she can finally talk to her.  

B.My character wants to be popular.She has had it with Kelly and Mandy!  


III.CLIMAX 
A.The most important event in the story is starnjia realizes that she should just be herself. 
B. The turning point for the main character is when her mother said being cool is worse than being uncool and she took the advise that is the turning point.  


IV. FALLING ACTION 
A.THE DIRECT RESULT IS THAT SCHOOL WAS ACTUALLY BETTER THAN BEFORE NOW THAT SHE TOOK HER MAMAS advise 
B. the reaction were that starnjia was happy and excited.


V. RESOLUTION 
A. my character learned that she should just be herself to succeed in school. 
B.my character is going to stay at mickeys middle school and handle her problems.



































  
6)starnjia finally realizes that she should just be herself.  
7)people started to treat her differently because she had stood up to kelly and mandy.  
8)starnjia didnot want to move after that and she had to be cause  her mom found a new job. 
9)they went back after her mom said okay and they stayed.  
10)she stayed in mickeys middle ever since it was time for high school.  


                                                                                            

1 comment:

Editor said...

Robbina-
Good job so far — can you break your outline up like the example I gave in class?

Make sure you're using proper punctuation and capitalization — for instance, place names, like Atlanta, should be capitalized.

Mr. Enders